Wednesday 1 October 2014

NDM - Essay Feedback

WWW:
Paragraph about youtube is good and focused on the question

EBI:
Need to be more relevant to the question.
The content needs to be updated to current media stories
Dont go of on other tangents

Self Evaluation:

I think that i should have revised more thoroughly for this test as my knowledge of the topic was not really going in any specific direction. I needed to have stayed relevant to the question and always related my answer back to it.

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